Tuesday, November 9, 2010


everything is out of order you don't understand well you couldn't understand because of the problem with the order it's misleading even if you don't know the truth take it for what it is and nothing more you can't go far with what's right in front of you you can't use the clues that were left because they weren't left as clues it's all too much to explain and well the problem with the order makes it useless to try just take my word for it and let the words fall where they may and make no sense of the whole or it will be lost on you forever just take it one piece at a time

trust me


  1. Nice stream of conciousness piece. : )
    it makes total sense to me.... Sign of a sick mind or of the collaborative genius we share?

  2. thank you, and to answer your question yes & yes!!!!

  3. Haha, this is lovely and what wisdom in 'you can't go far with what's right in front of you.' A reach for the stars moment. I talk like this too much... it unsettles people. :)

  4. kierstyboon ~ thank you for generously finding wisdom here & I think people rather need an unsettling don't you!

    Queen ~ thank you, it's the neurosis leaking out

  5. yes, i get caught in loops trying to make a whole when i'm fairly sure we aren't even meant to see that, never mind have the ability ... is why trust and intuition are as near the same and only stuff worth a non-linear nano-second of attention?

    wonderful and vital, La Lunatique!

  6. The punctuation is there, within each reader. Pieces like this which bring a reader's own experience into the understanding are more active pieces. I think what I'm getting at is that a reader has to interpret this in their own 'voice', like Kiersty; she can talk this way sometimes, as do you from your comment, but to me this was full of breaks and pauses.

    Your narrative voice is very strong, a great read for this cold, rainy evening.

  7. Thank you for visiting and leaving such a thoughtful comment. I'm thrilled that you felt the breaks and pauses, one never knows if it will come through.